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Her life started in the heat of a factory, and a mold of a cobbler,
cobbling along the beat of each sole.

She didn't know where she would end up, with all her two foot tall sexiness,
big enough for a size 8. But she knew-- oh yes, she knew, that she was sexy.

mmmm mmmm.

She passed along in her new home, complete with a roommate also so tantalizing
that neither had time for any drama with the other.

mmmm mmmmm.

But they made some drama together, oh, they were quite the pair.
And maybe they'd end up soleing the sole of a blonde bimbo
With only one cherry-- and that was the cherry flavored lipgloss she slathered on.

mmmm mmmm.

Yeah, they were meant for that, someday. They ruled over all those boy shoes,
and made the girl trainers stink with envy-- or maybe athletes foot...didn't matter.

mmmm mmmm.

And that was the attitude the pair had, you could tell it by their acute black tips,
pointed with indignation that those Vans boys would turn their tongues out
while they were caried past -- because that view came for a price. And they knew it.

mmmm mmmm.

Little did they know though, a high school girl was walking by,
And that girl stood tall and high, having the eye that turned
To admire the view they thought should be paid for.

mmmm mmmm.

She knew who was who. She knew it was she who was stronger,
Though yeah, the boots really were hot -- but not the real hot in the room,
Because all that comes from inside, and the shoes were right now empty.

mmmm mmmm.

But that was about to change, and the boots may have cried as her little feet
Entered-- smelling of cherries.

mmmm mmmm.

Because then they knew...that they had been dominated.
©2007-2009 ~SirNaelyan
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Author's Comments

Hmmmm. Sooo...I think this is my first openly sexual poem. It was a thing I decided to assign the poetry club I'm in-- choose a random object and write a story about it.

I'm kind of into the whole domination/submission thing...and so I think that somehow translated into these hot shoes that another poet there was wearing.

I have to say also that this is probably the gayest thing I've ever written, but I hope that somewhere in here there is a slight reminiscence of a young and strong black woman, because it's definitely one of those that owns the hooker boots now. =P

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:iconjimmasaur:
that... was hott. you call that sexual? ... well, you're right. shoes can be very sexual. i wore my all-white sneakers today. they're adidas. i felt like the boy next door... tomorrow? military-style black leather boots. i've been a 'good boy' all day. and i'll tell you; it's hard. i fav now.

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:iconsirnaelyan:
awww. You're so sweet. ^_^

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--SirNaelyan
:icondiaster:
"I have to say also that this is probably the gayest thing I've ever written, but I hope that somewhere in here there is a slight reminiscence of a young and strong black woman, because it's definitely one of those that owns the hooker boots now." :roflmao:

Wow, this is really fascinating. I didnt realize at first that you were speaking about the life of a shoe and her partner. I thought of a little asian girl that is paid 6 cents an hour to make shoes.

And the I thought to myself " :stupidme: "

And I read it over again and I wished I could hear you reading this aloud at a poetry reading. Dressed in a huge stiletto, of course.

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"There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind."
-Shel Silverstei
:icondorkisbroken:
I had to read this very slowly..
it's an interesting consept.. && I am very fond of using sexual imagary in poems [ as you can probably tell from my work ]

I think.. In some ways.. it's my favourite of your work.. && in others.. the worst..

I am fav-ing it all the same..=] xxxxxxxx

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cor. ;]
:iconsirnaelyan:
lol. If only props were allowed, maybe I could use some stilettoes. ^^

Little asian girls work, I guess. =P

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--SirNaelyan
:iconsirnaelyan:
lol. the worst, eh? why the worst? *always interested in how to improve*

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--SirNaelyan
:icondorkisbroken:
I'm not sure..
It's... patchy..
It doesn't flow..
&& fit..

But.. That's why I like it..
[laughs]


Also.. it's one of those poems that just oozes the word lust.. <3

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cor. ;]
:iconjimmasaur:
like shugga. (believe it!)

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